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This is how the silence begins –
in desolate noons stolen from barren
landscapes nobody visits –
in the blank wall of days that
stretches – endlessly blank –
it becomes your voice close to my heart now –
and your eyes all over the night sky –
it is one day, then another and then another…
until it will deepen into a dark well
that I will drown in – just to be
the silence you are.
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Well versed indeed 😀
Thank you very much!
dear *M*, here is my take. Good poem yes, but I am waiting for your work that is outside of love or longing or romantic idealism…like the acid burning one.
warmly don
🙂 thank you! … that is food for thought.
Beautifuk … as always.
Love,
mei
many thanks!
Very nice, I enjoyed reading this
This is a masterpiece, MJ…
I am completely effected!
hugs
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….:)) (speechless!)
In the sun.once again, ti shines.
nice! 🙂
Oh I am moved by your words. And I’ll be following your blog from now on.
Thank you very much. 🙂 Hope you will continue to enjoy my poems.
Trust me, I love reading poems, though I admit am not so good at writing them. Yours has that edge. Keep writing; you’re gifted.
🙂
Just wonderful! Stunning.
… this started as a thought when the evening sun hid behind a cloud suddenly… 🙂 Glad you like it.
This poem is an eloquent flow of thought and reiterates what you said about sadness and memory on my For Love, thank you for both.
Thanks for your thoughts. In this poem, nature’s silence is desolate… it often is. But sometimes, silence is kind.. or it can be a great longing, that transcends words.
You are very talented with your words! I enjoyed reading your poetry! : )
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Thank you! I try to make them count… 🙂
An unusual observation ….. keep writing
Thanks Rosie. Good to see you here. Have a good week ahead!
A marvelous read, even better to have experienced the second and third time through.
Many thanks for your generous words. 🙂
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mj: a very fine poem, and i’ve reposted. thx for sharing! RT
Oh, thanks very much. Kind of you!
shhhhhhhhhh
:))