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earth, Facebook, night, poems and poetry, revolution, spin, twitter
“Times are changing,” you inform me.
I hear you. At 15, it is like
the rebellion starting without its
favorite hero…
“fading ideals” of friends, doors
that don’t agree to stand open for you!
At 15, it is the first summer marked
for memory scrapbook.
A slew of calls from friends on holiday,
hairstyles that last a week – when they last
really long…
and a gawky stretched human frame unfit
for home décor!
There’s more, more causes for starting movements,
Facebook does not have “enough reach”,
restless twittering of happy ideas that
“can change the world” and oh,
don’t forget, the earth
spins too slowly to keep up!
I see your righteous bewilderment
and those surprised
circles your fingers trace furiously
in the air. “Yes, 15 is the first
heady challenge.” I sagely submit!
“But,” I hurriedly add, “it passes.
Summer returns,
and the earth adjusts its spin to keep
pace with revolutions – yours.”
“The stars will chart your course
to a forgotten friend when Facebook
falters, and one door will stay open
only for you, especially for you.”
Evening slips into the warm quilt
of a winter’s night. The displaced molecules
are reluctant to return
to their old places.
A door closes, it’s a firm click.
Childhood locked away.
“Summer will return,” I insist.
I’m not sure you are listening!
Sketch by Rashmi Jauhari.

Very well put, mj. Just one thing. The last line. Are you sure you didn’t want it to read: “I’m sure you are not listening”?
Ah, you are so right! Perhaps, my vanity got in the way of admitting this…?
It’s a beautiful drawing which shows a great eye (and love) of youth. 15 is indeed the prime of our youth, and we were all liable to feeling that we will conquer the world and that the world will succumb to our high ideals.
Thank you!
Spot on! It is very amusing to watch them deal with their kids
Is Rashmi the 15 year old in question?
No… she used to to be 15 many years ago…. it is my son who was 15…2 years ago.
Hello, MJ. I have nominated your blog for an award. If you’d like to pick it up, here is the link:
http://85degrees.wordpress.com/2013/02/07/appreciation-and-awards/#comment-1080
Congrats. Your blog is a joy to read!
Many thanks Uzoma for your generous words and your nomination. It is a pleasure to read your blog – it tells me what is being published these days. Thanks again!
MJ, I am enjoying reading your words. You have a compelling writing style and well conceived.
Thank you for reading! I had written this for my son as he had celebrated his 15th bday.